Changes between Version 2 and Version 3 of song_okudjava_staryi_pidzhak

Timestamp:

Mar 9, 2020, 2:32:44 AM (5 years ago)

Author:

kgushin

Comment:

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song_okudjava_staryi_pidzhak

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 ''Б. Окуджава''
 
-Простое двухголосие (MuseScore, PDF, mp3).
+Простое двухголосие ([attachment:Okudzhava__Staryi_pidzhak.mscz MuseScore], [attachment:Okudzhava__Staryi_pidzhak.pdf PDF], [download:169 mp3]).
 
-[[Image()]]
+[[Image(Okudzhava__Staryi_pidzhak.png)]]
 
                           ''Жанне Болотовой''
@@ -44 +44 @@
 
 I'd worn my ragged coat so bare[[BR]]
-The tattered sleaves were thin as paper[[BR]]
+The tattered sleeves were thin as paper[[BR]]
 And so I took it to a tailor[[BR]]
 And asked him kindly for repair.[[BR]]
+
 I made a joke and said, this coat[[BR]]
 Requires total restoration,[[BR]]
 To bring me glory and salvation[[BR]]
 I need your skillful hand to sew.[[BR]]
+
 But then my playful little words[[BR]]
 Took on a meaning uninteded[[BR]]
 As he methodically mended[[BR]]
 He seemed disturbed, peculiar bird.[[BR]] 
+
 And I observed the silent way[[BR]] 
 He worked to rectify the garment[[BR]] 
 As though my soul depended on it,[[BR]] 
 This ragged coat, for all may days.[[BR]] 
+
 He thought I'd slip into the sleeve[[BR]] 
 And I would live again so clearly[[BR]]